Раздел 4. Методическая компетентность
4.1. В выполненном учеником задании С1 «Личное письмо» 170 слов. Как в этом случае проверяется эта работа:
а) работа проверяется полностью, но снижается 1 балл по критерию "Организация текста" за превышение объема
б) отсчитывается 154 слова от начала работы, отчеркивается и проверяется только эта часть
в) отсчитывается 140 слов от начала работы, отчеркивается и проверяется только эта часть
4.2.Подсчитайте количество слов в этом отрывке из личного письма, выполненного учащимся. Сколько их?
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Flat 8
5 Mira street
Torzhok
Russia
16 May 2008
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а) 7
б) 10
в) 8
4.3. Изучите задание и дополнительную схему оценивания к нему. Какой аспект содержания отсутствует (или сформулирован неверно) в данной работе?
Дополнительная схема, критерий «содержание»:
Аспект 1) Благодарность за полученное письмо, ссылка на предыдущие контакты.
Аспект 2) Ответ на вопрос, выбрал ли автор письма будущую профессию.
Аспект 3) Ответ на вопрос, какую профессию выбрал автор.
Аспект 4) Ответ на вопрос о мотивах выбора данной профессии.
Аспект 5) Три вопроса о планах на путешествие заданы.
Аспект 6) Нормы вежливости соблюдены: ссылка на предыдущие контакты; благодарность за полученное письмо; надежда на последующие контакты.
Аспект 7) Стилевое оформление выбрано правильно: обращение, завершающая фраза, подпись автора в соответствии с неофициальным стилем.
Задание для учащегося
С1. You have received a letter from your English-speaking pen friend Bill who writes
…I don’t think it will be a problem for me to choose a good job in the future as I’m really interested in foreign languages, cultures and countries and I hope I’ll work as a translator or teacher of foreign languages some day. Have you already decided on your career? What job are you going to choose? Why?
I’ve lived in the USA my whole life but I’d really love to travel to other countries…
Write a letter to Bill.
In your letter
answer his questions
ask 3 questions about his plans for travelling.
Write 100 – 140 words.
Remember the rules of letter writing.
Текст личного письма учащейся (с сохранением орфографии и пунктуации оригинала)
Dear Bill,
It was nice to hear from you. I’m sorry I couldn’t write you earlier because I was very busy.
In your letter you tell me about your future profession and ask me about my choise. Of course I have decided about my future career. As for me I would like to become a translator too. I choose this profession because I found it rather interesting because I be able to travel to other countries and speak with other people. Also I like something new and unusual. So I want to study Japanise language. It was nice to hear that you want to travel somewhere. I like travelling too.
That is all for now. Hope to hear from you soon.
Love,
Nataly
4.4. Изучите задание и дополнительную схему оценивания к нему. Какой аспект организации текста отсутствует (или нарушен) в данной работе?
Дополнительная схема по критерию «Организация текста»:
Аспект 1) Логичность.
Аспект 2) Деление на абзацы.
Аспект 3) Средства логической связи.
Аспект 4) Обращение на отдельной строке.
Аспект 5) Завершающая фраза на отдельной строке.
Аспект 6) Подпись на отдельной строке.
Аспект 7) Адрес автора в правом верхнем углу (можно краткий).
Аспект 8) Дата под адресом.
Текст личного письма учащейся (с сохранением орфографии и пунктуации оригинала)
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Zapolyarny
Russia
16th May, 2008
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Dear Bill,
Thanks a lot for your letter. I am glad that you don’t forget about me. Sorry that I didn’t reply you at once, but I have really busy. May is very difficult time for school leavers isn’t it?
Anyway, I found free time and answer you. I think that foreign teacher is a good job. I want to be a teacher, too.
However, It is a difficult job. You must be sociable and hardworking. I think that this job is for me, because my mother is a teacher and I want to be like my mother and I like children
Where will you go? If you want you could go to Moscow. I like this city and what about you? Will you wright me when you will travel?
That’s about all for now.
All the best, Inna.
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4.5. Изучите задание и дополнительную схему оценивания к нему. Какой аспект содержания отсутствует (или сформулирован неверно) в данной работе?
Дополнительная схема к критерию «Содержание»:
Аспект 1) вступление – постановка проблемы;
Аспект 2) мнение автора с 2-3 аргументами;
Аспект 3) противоположная точка зрения с 1-2 аргументами;
Аспект 4) объяснения, почему автор не согласен с противоположной точкой зрения (контраргументы);
Аспект 5) заключение с подтверждением позиции автора;
Аспект 6) стилевое оформление выбрано правильно: соблюдается нейтральный стиль.
Задание для учащихся
C2. Comment on the following statement.
It’s reported that billions of dollars are spent on space exploration projects every year. Some people believe that this money should be used to solve problems on Earth.
What is your opinion? What problems should humanity solve first of all?
Write 200 – 250 words.
Use the following plan:
make an introduction (state the problem)
express your personal opinion and give reasons for it
give arguments for the other point of view and explain why you don’t agree with it.
draw a conclusion.
Текст выполненного учащимся письменного высказывания с элементами рассуждения (с сохранением языкового оформления)
Our science have changed every year. Nowadays a lot of money is spent on space exploration projects. Many people think that it is not right because this money should be used to solve problems on Earth. Let’s consider both views on this issue.
In my opinion, space exploration is very importand for us because we must know more about universal, planets, stars and meteorits. Scientists haven’t already know all about of them and if they are dangerous for us. Secondly, when scientists studied the sun they discovered new chemestry elements for example gelius. Also when they study the sun they study how our healthe depends from it. Thirdly, we can travel on space and see Earth from space-ship. People spend a lot of money for this traveling so they give this money for new discovers.
On the other hand, some people who think that space exploration it is a waste of time and money because this money can help people who have very dangerous illnesses. Secondly, goverment can helps spend this money on our education. They can buy new equipmen for school. Thirdly, this money can be used for helping poor countries and people who live in them. This money can help to make their life better.
In conchesion, I would like to say that it’s better to spend money on space exploration because in future people will live in space.
4.6. Прочитайте фрагмент выполненного учащимся задания. Какое из выполненных учащимися вступлений написано правильно?
Задание для учащихся
C2. Comment on the following statement.
It’s reported that billions of dollars are spent on space exploration projects every year. Some people believe that this money should be used to solve problems on Earth.
What is your opinion? What problems should humanity solve first of all?
Write 200 – 250 words.
Use the following plan:
make an introduction (state the problem)
express your personal opinion and give reasons for it
give arguments for the other point of view and explain why you don’t agree with it.
draw a conclusion.
а) It’s reported that billions of dollars are spent on space exploration projects every year. Some people belive that this money should be used to solve problems on Earth. And I think so.
б) Problems of space exploration and problems of Earth are very important, I think. But which problem is more important for humanity?
в) Nowadays, most billions of dollars are spent on space exploration. For what do they do it? There are a lot of advantages and disadvantages of spending this money.
4.7. Прочитайте фрагмент выполненного учащимся задания. Какое из выполненных учащимися заключений написано правильно?
Задание для учащихся
C2. Comment on the following statement.
It’s reported that billions of dollars are spent on space exploration projects every year. Some people believe that this money should be used to solve problems on Earth.
What is your opinion? What problems should humanity solve first of all?
Write 200 – 250 words.
Use the following plan:
make an introduction (state the problem)
express your personal opinion and give reasons for it
give arguments for the other point of view and explain why you don’t agree with it.
draw a conclusion.
а) To sum up, I believe that such spending money on space exploration is not only waste of time, but a part of every human’s life too.
б) In conclusion, I would like to say that all money which have all gaverments must be spend for people.
в) To finish, money cannot decide all problems on Earth. Money cannot decide the problem of love, the problem of friend or the problem of communication with your relatives. People should not believe, that money should be used to solve problems on Earth, because our life will be boring, not interesting without problems.
4.8. Прочитайте фрагмент выполненного учащимся задания. Какое начало основной части (первый абзац основной части, раскрывающий первый пункт плана в основной части) из приведенных ниже написан правильно с точки зрения критерия «содержание»? Высказали ли учащиеся свое мнение и привели ли два весомых развернутых аргумента в защиту своей позиции?
Дополнительная схема к критерию «Содержание»:
Аспект 1) вступление – постановка проблемы;
Аспект 2) мнение автора с 2-3 аргументами;
Аспект 3) противоположная точка зрения с 1-2 аргументами;
Аспект 4) объяснения, почему автор не согласен с противоположной точкой зрения;
Аспект 1) заключение с подтверждением позиции автора;
Аспект 1) стилевое оформление выбрано правильно: соблюдается нейтральный стиль.
а) In my opinion, we must spend that money in this two ways. In one hand, we must know what happaning in space, and we should be ready to protect our planet in space. I think aliens can flying somewhere in space and we must be ready. In other hand, we must solve our Earth problems like terror, transport problems and etc. This problems are very important for our live. All our money must spend in good way and make our live better.
б) The space problem is very important in the world. The Earth is in danger. People give a money on space exploration projects to save our planet from bad things, which can happened with the planet. Also the enviroment on the planet is in danger, too. People can save the space and our planet by space exploration projects.
в) To start with, I am deeply concerned that billions of dollars are wasted on space exploration projects. Nowadays people don’t take care about our planet, the only place where we can live yet. I think, there are a lot of ecological problems which should be solved, such as air pollution, which cause global warming, water contemination and so on. Moreover a lot of endangered species are in need to help them. Old people need this money to improve their health and living conditions.
4.9. Прочитайте фрагмент выполненного учащимся задания. Какое продолжение основной части (второй абзац основной части, раскрывающий второй пункт плана в основной части) из приведенных ниже написан правильно с точки зрения критерия «содержание»? Привели ли учащиеся иное мнение по обсуждающемуся вопросу и правильно ли дали контраргументы?
Дополнительная схема к критерию «Содержание»:
Аспект 1) вступление – постановка проблемы;
Аспект 2) мнение автора с 2-3 аргументами;
Аспект 3) противоположная точка зрения с 1-2 аргументами;
Аспект 4) объяснения, почему автор не согласен с противоположной точкой зрения;
Аспект 1) заключение с подтверждением позиции автора;
Аспект 1) стилевое оформление выбрано правильно: соблюдается нейтральный стиль.
а) Some people think, that space projects is not very important and is not very useful, and human must think about global problems, because, if we would not solve this problems, people and whole the Earth could die.
б) On the other hand many people think that space exploration projects is a bad idea because there are a lot of more urgent problems on Earth. I don’t agree with this point of view because due to these projects people made many discoveries which helped to improve different equipment and find new medicines.
в) However, there are some arguments for spending a lot of money on space exploration projects. It is opinion that the deeper we explore space the sooner we will get answers on different questions. Researchers will be always looking for a different forms of life. Human being was always interested in founding UFO.
г) However we have got another opinion some people think that they musn’t help each other. And they are egoistic. They think only for there life. People musn’t do so. They want to be a king of all the world. It is bad for our population, for our children, for our life.
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